Six Sentence Sunday
Jul. 22nd, 2012 10:17 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
This is from something new I'm starting. The first six sentences of a modern day demon hunter story. Six rather long sentences now that I'm looking at them. See what you think.
Madog’s whole life felt off kilter. Instead of finishing school at the University of Demonic Studies, Cardiff Branch, he’d found himself standing with his father in the president’s office for the Pittsburgh Branch, in the States.
“It’s an honor to have you here, General Glendower,” General Williams said, looking every bit as hard as Madog expected. Even half world away, he had heard of the secret weapon the Pittsburgh Branch harbored under William’s tight control: a half demon.
Madog had been shocked when his father said the Order had wanted him to accompany his father to the States. Even though Madog had yet to graduate from the university, he held the rank of sergeant in the Order.
Madog’s whole life felt off kilter. Instead of finishing school at the University of Demonic Studies, Cardiff Branch, he’d found himself standing with his father in the president’s office for the Pittsburgh Branch, in the States.
“It’s an honor to have you here, General Glendower,” General Williams said, looking every bit as hard as Madog expected. Even half world away, he had heard of the secret weapon the Pittsburgh Branch harbored under William’s tight control: a half demon.
Madog had been shocked when his father said the Order had wanted him to accompany his father to the States. Even though Madog had yet to graduate from the university, he held the rank of sergeant in the Order.