Rainbow Snippets

[jana_denardo]

Okay actually the picture has diddly to do with today's snippet. It's just one of many dogwood photos I took hiking yesterday and I thought growing up in an urban prison slum, Kaleo missed out on such beauty.

This week's snippet comes from when Aneurin takes Kaleo to the estate (the night after the swimming one from last week). There is a device the Toymakers implanted in their Toys like Kaleo that can be used to remotely arouse the Toys. What neither man knows is Aneurin set the controller in a 'safe place' since he loathes the very idea and Smoke, his lynx size cat-thing has found the remote....



The need to fuck robbed him of all sense and desire flooded him in ever increasing waves, leaving Kaleo panting. Where the hell was Aneurin? Why leave him suffer? Why was he turning the device up more? Writhing on the bed, wanting to fight his training, Kaleo sucked in enough of a breath to gasp, “House, tell Shyroth to come here.”

He didn’t know if the house would page Aneurin or if the scientist would come, Kaleo didn’t want to be seen like this, aroused, ridiculously vulnerable, so he flipped onto his side, dragging the sheet over him.


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Comments

[addisonalbright.livejournal.com]

Sweet! I want a house that does my bidding for me, too. 😄

[jana-denardo.livejournal.com]

No kidding. Actually I'd rather have one that cleaned itself.

[dawn sister (from livejournal.com)]

Nice. Is the house turning up the heat, or is it someone else?

[jana-denardo.livejournal.com]

It's actually the cat who has the controller but Aneurin doesn't know it and has no idea Kaleo's in distress

[(Anonymous)]

Poor Kaleo, I can feel his frustration.

[(Anonymous)]

Darn, I'm anonymous. It's Louise Lyons :)

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[cauldronkeeper.livejournal.com]

Wow, this is reminding me more and more of 'Ai no Kusabi'! (Not that I mind one bit, since I loved Ai no Kusabi) Poor Kaleo, these control devices truly do turn one's passions into toys.

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[jana-denardo.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Now there's something I haven't thought about in ages, Ai no Kusabi. Might be some influence from that after all.

[paula wyant (from livejournal.com)]

I want to know what's going to happen when Aneurin walks into the room... (And if he'll figure out what's happening. And keep the controller in a safer place after this... like a safe. Or destroyed.)

[jana-denardo.livejournal.com]

thanks. It'll be awkward and anger inducing and yes the controller goes in the safe