Six Sentence Sunday
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jana_denardoSince I've just completed the first round of edits from my novella The Darkest Midnight in December have the opening six sentences.
“How many babies have gone missing?” Li asked.
Caleb tapped the briefcase holding a stack of files given to him by General Taglioferro before they left their headquarters in Pittsburgh. “Three and several couples. The local priests and police think it’s all the work of demons.”
“I was too busy packing.” Temple patted the box that held his Tommy gun and ammunition.
“How many babies have gone missing?” Li asked.
Caleb tapped the briefcase holding a stack of files given to him by General Taglioferro before they left their headquarters in Pittsburgh. “Three and several couples. The local priests and police think it’s all the work of demons.”
“I was too busy packing.” Temple patted the box that held his Tommy gun and ammunition.
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Date: 2012-03-05 02:24 pm (UTC)What is a Tommy gun?
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Date: 2012-03-05 04:45 pm (UTC)It's a machine gun, the ones that the gangsters used back in the 20's-30's. I forgot to mention in the write up that this is set in 1930
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thompson_submachine_gun