Riding with Strangers - hook Plus Demon Hunter's Hook

I'm sharing this hook for Riding with Strangers for my erotic urban fantasy/mystery for part of Kimberly Zook's Hooked on Hooks challenge as part of the platform campaign. What a neat, and very helpful, idea. I might be a day late on this (the yahoo group didn't bounce it to me until today) but even so, my usual friends can feel free to comment on this hook too. Does it work for you? Why or why not?
We only have one chance to hook a reader so I want this to be as good as it can be.

Thanks for reading.
( Riding with stranger's hook )

ETA - since linky isn't letting me change my url destination I'm putting both hooks here.

click here to go to the other hook, thank you very much


and I hope that others coming here from other journals won't have too much of an issue leaving a comment since Blogspot is really fighting me using open id. sigh.